I'm pleased to see something before assessment. Most of the changes I suggested when I last saw you, were graphical ones. I don't think you have made many of those, which is entirely up to you. I also notice the quality of the "intro" and "poor result" animation including; the clarity of the voice over, level of animation/quality of movement (number of frames), expression of characters, use of camera to assist in communicating the concept, has not had any further attention. It also appears that to date you have decided not to heed any suggestions about improving the clarity of purpose or aim of the game play. All fairly straight-forward edits that require a lot of attention, but are not reliant on advanced coding or Artificial intelligence. I would prefer to have seen a marked improvement since your last presentation.
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I'm pleased to see something before assessment.
Most of the changes I suggested when I last saw you, were graphical ones. I don't think you have made many of those, which is entirely up to you.
I also notice the quality of the "intro" and "poor result" animation including; the clarity of the voice over, level of animation/quality of movement (number of frames), expression of characters, use of camera to assist in communicating the concept, has not had any further attention.
It also appears that to date you have decided not to heed any suggestions about improving the clarity of purpose or aim of the game play. All fairly straight-forward edits that require a lot of attention, but are not reliant on advanced coding or Artificial intelligence.
I would prefer to have seen a marked improvement since your last presentation.
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